Review my Common App essay prompt #2 for Early Action

<p>Hi could any of you review my common app essay? I had it reviewed a few times but I think it's still lacking.
I am applying to Princeton SCEA so I would appreciate a quick response. </p>

<p>Thank you!</p>

<p>You can send to me if you wish,Me a parent</p>

<p>I’ll review it.</p>

<p>I would love to take a look!</p>

<p>If not too late, I’m happy to look it over…i’m a better-than-decent editor :slight_smile: </p>