<p>This is far from done, has to be max 400 words. I have 394. Can someone critique my rough draft? I will pm upon request. </p>
<p>Thanks!</p>
<p>hey, i’d be happy to read it
i’m applying to art schools too (though probably not risd, can’t get merit aid from them, so i won’t be a thief)
:)</p>
<p>okkk mang I’ll pm you. Take into account it is still unfinished. If you can give me some tips about how to wrap it up I would be greatly appreciative.</p>