rough draft of essay due. need a lot of HELP

<p>hey guys, so most seniors have until January 1 for their first RD colleges. I had the intention to go to Georgia Tech, but my parents still wanted me to try and apply everywhere else.</p>

<p>I have 2 short essays based on the topics, "for what concern will you focus your profession and how will GT's education help you" and "who has had the most impact on how you see the world"</p>

<p>My personal statement is about what achievement is to me and my greatest achievement (it is still in the rough draft form and I am freaking out)</p>

<p>I am asking as many people to give me helpful feedbacks since CC seems to be very helpful. Ask for a PM and thank you all so much!</p>

<p>PS: for my extracurricular essay on the common app...is it ok to go beyond the 150word maximum? My friend wrote 430 words but I am wondering if he is even allowed to do that.</p>

<p>PM me, I have lots of free time over the winter break. = D</p>

<p>The extracurricular essay is supposed to be "150 words or fewer." If you go over the limit, it's going to show the colleges that you have a complete disregard for simple directions. So keep it short and concise.</p>

<p>i will read it. <a href="mailto:tyac.sg@gmail.com">tyac.sg@gmail.com</a></p>