<p>PM me here if you'll read it, it is on a pretty risky subject (illness), I am not sure if I focus enough on how I came through strongly, I am afraid that it may sound a bit like I am trying to make them feel sorry for me</p>
<p>it's about 546 words, I need to cut it down to 500</p>
<p>Thanks</p>
<p>I'll read it. In fact, I'll pm you my essay in exchange.</p>
<p>sure, sounds good</p>
<p>i will read it!</p>
<p>bring up my post</p>
<p>I'll read it.
But I want to warn you, don't phrase your essay as if to make the adcoms feel sorry for you.</p>
<p>I sent you it in a private message, Anhtimmy</p>
<p>I'll read it!</p>