<p>I picked a slightly cynical topic, if someone could have a look at it and tell me what they think I would appreciate it forever. Thanks!</p>
<p>What exactly is your topic?</p>
<p>what is the topic? you can send me your essay-- I can't promise a lot of feedback on the actual writing but I can comment on your topic. My essay is risky also so I can give you that perspective.</p>