<p>i rewrote my essay from a different point of view than my original, can someone skim both versions and give their opinion on which is stronger? </p>
<p>warning, its sorta a risky essay. thanks!</p>
<p>sure send it over</p>
<p>i dont need a lot of time from anyone just a quick glance and opinion would be great :)</p>
<p>...anyone?</p>
<p>Check your email klynchhhhh. And when in doubt, go with the version i corrected. Always. :P</p>