<p>Does anyone have a sample 'personal experience that changed you' essay? I wrote how I felt but I fear mine is too cheesy and cliched. Thanks!</p>
<p>I don't think anyone here is going to send you their's, for fear of plagarism and such, but I know there are books and probably websites that you can find that have sample essays you can look at, such as Amazon.com:</a> 100 Successful College Application Essays: Books: Christopher J. Georges,Gigi Georges</p>
<p>Then does anyone got one that they used before and not anymore? I just want to see what a good one would be like. Thanks.</p>
<p>There are many sites that list personal statements. Of course they should only bes used as a template to start your own writing. On of the best is Sample</a> personal statements law, medical, graduate</p>
<p>I wrote about surgery on my ass. Seriously. It turned out to be a kickass essay (no pun intended)</p>
<p>See the links I posted on the above "General Advice" thread. There are some examples of personal essays.</p>