SAT Essay Grade Please (Current)

Test Preparation
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Hey Guys! Can you please give me a grade and some feedback?

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KhK2CRBECmGCfs9_qIX9o1TPUaVy8KgC2OWM6X8pBKI/edit

(I will write smaller on the actual tests to fit it on 2 pages).
Thank you so much!