<p>My essay Rough:</p>
<p>Although many Individuals see new discoveries and innovations as having controversial effects, it can go both ways depending on what situation you are given. I then talked more about this in depth a little in the intro.</p>
<p>1st Body: I talked about Mars and the discoveries we have made, and how it has brought more challenges to our science community and the new responsibilities we now have.</p>
<p>2nd- I talked about the enviornment, I did not get to any big prolific point here; it was pretty vague. </p>
<p>3rd- I wrapped up my main idea in a short concise way.</p>
<p>Throughout my essay I did not have very great depth and meaning, some parts were not entirely connected correctly. What kind of score would I earn? This was a pretty difficult essay question. How bad will it affect m writing section? Thanks.</p>