<li>What did u guys put on the “tendency of having” question</li>
<li>the Churchill one with “insights into the workings of the human mind”</li>
<li>and “Forty years have passed since African-Americans staged a march on Washington D.C., in an attempt to secure civil rights.” with in an attempt underlined.
the writing section wasn’t bad, but these doubts are bothering me</li>
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<p>I put choice E for all 3 of those.</p>
<p>is insights into an appropriate phrase</p>
<p>don't we say "insights of" instead of "insights into"?</p>
<p>the comma for 3. is not needed</p>
<p>yea u def dont need into becuase thats what insigts imply</p>
<p>So you take out the into and have it be "insights the workings of the human mind?" Yeah, that makes sense. I do not believe the comma was underlined for number 3.</p>
<p>there has to be a different phrase</p>
<p>darn. i thot there was something wrong in all of them, it doesn't look very good for my writing score now</p>
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<li>I put tendency of having as wrong</li>
<li>I think "insights into" is the correct phrase, so I put no error.</li>
<li>I put no error. Was the comma underlined though? I guess the comma isn't necessary, now that I look at it...</li>
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<p>Tickle exact same as me. I think we are right. I dont think CB ever tests commas or even punctuation in sentence errors. I havent seen that on any practice tests.</p>
<p>insights into is so ackward f this shi t</p>
<p>The comma in 3 was not underlined.</p>
<p>What about the question about the television clothing commercials? Was the "condemned to be" idiomatic? I thought it should've been condemned as, but I wasn't sure..</p>
<p>I chose the letter for "in an attempt" just because "attempting" sounds better since there was a comma in the sentence. Maybe someone who actually knows grammar rules can enlighten us on what the right answer is? :P</p>
<p>Yeah, I circled the "to be" in that question.</p>
<p>the comma wasn't underlined, but i chose "in an attempt" because i thought it should be "attempting," given the comma, thus making that entire last clause parenthetical</p>
<p>The above statement is correct.</p>
<p>which one?</p>
<p>any more opinions? i don't know what to think now, lol</p>
<p>for the "tendency of having" question, the error in it was choice C : "bored at being"</p>