Semi risky/different essay

College Essays
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<p>Would anyone like to critique my essay? I'm a little worried it might not be appropriate.</p>

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<p>I will help you out.</p>

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<p>I'd love to! Pm it to me</p>

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<p>I will give it a read!</p>

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<p>i'll read it!</p>

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<p>I'll read it; PM me!</p>

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<p>i'll read it. pm me.</p>

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<p>PM it over...</p>

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<p>PM it up baby</p>

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<p>I can help.</p>

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<p>pm it or email it</p>

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<p>PM me i'll help</p>

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<p>pm it to me.</p>

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<p>If you need another reader, PM it over.</p>

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<p>PM it to me as well and I will answer alllll of your questions..</p>

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<p>Sure! I was known as the Grammar Nazi in high school, so I can help you out on that aspect too if I happen to come across any errors. LOL</p>