<p>Yeah, I got through some of this essay and I'm just really stuck...</p>
<p>I just wanted to see if it made sense so far so if anyone could read and give me some comments that'd be great. Thanks</p>
<p>No prb, pm it over!</p>
<p>Thanks, I sent it. Can anyone else help me?</p>
<p>PM me and I will try to read it.</p>
<p>Sent and I actually finished but I think there needs to be a lot of revision. More people?</p>
<p>I'll look at it, but beware: I am a brutal editor.</p>