Several First-Time Questions on SAT Essay

<p>Writing is my strong point, but I understand that to do well on a standardized test, the scorer will look for specifics.</p>

<p>I have some questions on the content of the essay...
1. Is using allusions appropriate or does the scorer prefer more blunt writing?
2. Vocabulary matters... but which words are most impressive? Uncommonly used, many syllables, what?
3. On referencing works of literature and facts, I've heard just making up statistics can work well. Can anyone back this up? Also, is there a good list of people, events, and literature to use in support of the argument given?</p>

<p>Thanks in advance, good luck to everyone! :D</p>

<ol>
<li><p>Alluding to literary work, historical events, etc is fine.</p></li>
<li><p>A word with many syllables doesn’t make it “impressive.” For example, “tetrafluoroethylene” has a lot of syllables, but it is actually a simple compound (C2F4). You can spice up your essay with a few “big” words but don’t overdo it.</p></li>
<li><p>Yes. The graders only spend about 3 minutes reading/grading your essay. They’re not going to look up all the data that you cited in those three minutes.</p></li>
</ol>

<p>Thanks rspence! Now my primary concern is to really get some good historical, literary, whatever examples I can use for arguments. Does anyone know of a source like that?</p>

<p>Umm, read more literature? That’s about all I can say.</p>

<p>Here’s a good thread for Literature and Historical examples: <a href=“http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/sat-act-tests-test-preparation/440742-literature-historical-examples-sat-essay.html[/url]”>http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/sat-act-tests-test-preparation/440742-literature-historical-examples-sat-essay.html&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

<p>You could also try to make up a book that sounds realistic, and just change its plot depending on the essay prompt. Sometimes, I’m just sitting there racking my brain for literature examples, and so many minutes pass that I just use a made up book. It’s quicker and easier! :smiley: </p>

<p>It also works with historical examples, like making up a battle that happened 400 years ago in Europe. </p>

<p>Good luck!</p>

<p>Remember, you can always use personal examples!</p>

<p>Ohh thanks for that thread jumper! Exactly what I’m looking for :slight_smile: This forum is really a masterpiece. It’s pretty hilarious that you can get so much for BSing even on something like the SAT… but hey, if it sounds stupid and it works, it’s not stupid.</p>

<p>@jacob that’s a good point. I’ve been reading the example 12s thread on here and it looks like a lot of people underestimate the personal ones.</p>

<p>Another question, is it necessary to provide an example that refutes your argument? Seems to be the case on the ACT but I’m not sure about SAT.</p>

<p>An example that refutes your argument would refute your argument. Not good when trying to argue for or against something.</p>

<p>Usually you would at least mention the opposing view, and assess pros/cons of that view.</p>

<p>Bumppppppppp</p>

<p>format i follow, generally i receive 10-12 from cc graders
opening sentence= stand on prompt
sentence 2= rephrase prompt in a different way
sentence 3= thesis
sentence 4= description of example 1
sentence 5= I always start this sentence with “Likewise,” description of example 2</p>

<p>transition to example 1
description of topic in 2 sentences
tie back to thesis 2 sentences</p>

<p>same for example 2 and 3</p>

<p>conclusion
reaffirm stand
restate thesis in different words
leave the reader with some “food for thought” with the last sentence i almost always use a semicolon here with however or furthermore.</p>

<p>Sweet. Thanks to everyone who replied. After I get some examples memorized, I’ll try posting some essays myself.</p>

<p>Here goes my first try at the essay…</p>

<p>Does fame bring happiness, or are people who are not famous more likely to be happy?</p>

<p>“For the world is not painted, or adorned, but is from the beginning beautiful,” said Ralph Waldo Emerson, a philosopher at the forefront of Transcendentalist thinking. In all parts of the modern world, society runs and thrives on what is paraded, what is bought and sold. Those blessed with fame are well off in the material department, and constantly attended to. Fame itself is treated as a physical object in its modern context. Happiness, though, is a feeling–independent of the physical object.</p>

<p>Tween dreams today often consist of gleaming cars, stacks of cash, sycophants following one’s every move. Numerous studies in the UK and the US show that a third of Generation Y would rather spend their lives as celebrities than scientists; possessions and glitz are becoming favorable to the pursuit of knowledge. At the same time, these aspirations are taking hold of their lives, leading to increased rates of suicide and depression.</p>

<p>Do the admired celebrities with “all that” truly lead lives in high spirits? In the case of Britney Spears, most would say not. At the height of her career she was a household name and a Halloween costume. Now she is the crazy bald girl, washed out by the tide of entertainment that has since brought new acts to the stage. When questioned by paparazzi, “Why?” she replied, “Because of you.”</p>

<p>Many of those in the less fortunate positions of our modern-day caste system still find it in themselves to enjoy life. In “Little Princes,” a true story profiling a country only recently recovering from civil war, sat an orphanage dedicated to safeguarding trafficked children. These children were bought, sold, separated from families, and conditioned to believe they were orphans. However, even in the face of such adversity would they marvel at the bubbles made by an extra serving of shampoo or go into hysterics how a volunteer at their home would butcher a foreign word. The very simple things in life are free from worry and very inclined toward happiness.</p>

<p>Fame is much desired and not necessarily enjoyed. It comes from oversaturation of the delicacies that surround us, and is often transient. Though every one of us desires happiness, few of us realize that it comes so much more easily through the immaterial.</p>