Significant Experience Essay- Quick read.. thoughts?

College Essays
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<p>Heyyy everyone! I finished the commonapp essay on a significant experience that impacted you and I was wondering if I could get some feedback! No matter how harsh, I really need the critique. </p>

<p>So pleaseee read about "The Orchestras in the Operating Room"!</p>

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<p>bummpppp…</p>

<p>PM me if you’d like to help out</p>

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<p>bummppppp… pleaseee, i wanted to submit tonight :)</p>