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<p>Hi. My CommonApp deadline is less than 12 hours away and I'm very nerve-wracked. My emotional states keep swinging back and forth from absolute panic to hideous laughter for no reason at all. I would really love to go countdown New Years with others in the city but.. darn it! Stupid essays!!</p>

<p>Anyway, I have about 4 essays/short answers due and I'm currently done with one, while working on half-finished other 3. So.. may I ask of College Essays people to take a peek through my short answer (commonapp <150 words) essay?</p>

<p>pm me, e-mail me at <a href="mailto:cyborgxxi@gmail.com">cyborgxxi@gmail.com</a></p>

<p>PS: It's 7:00 PM here in +7 GMT (Asia). The deadline is 11:59:59 PM (Dec 31) but in US time. Can I send it in the morning, as long as it's before 12 midnight in the US?</p>

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<p>bump?</p>

<p>Or just leave a message here and I’ll pm you or e-mail you. Danke~</p>

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<p>bumping again.</p>

<p>Please, anyone? I will also be willing to look at yours also, if you want.</p>

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<p>I will help if you still need it. :)</p>

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<p>Alright thanks! Less than 4 hours until that CommonApp goes out.. haha I’m so nervous</p>

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<p>if you still need some one to look over ur essay, jst pm :smiley: kinda free after sending the package (though i still have 7 more to go :)) )</p>

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<p>The deadline is 11:59 Jan 1 actually</p>

<p>Hope you know</p>

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<p>Yes I know that! I have about 27 minutes left. Gah. I’m finalizing my CommonApp :)</p>

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<p>Yes. 6 minutes left now. <em>giggles</em></p>

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<p>no Jan 1st 11:59 means tomorrow night, so you have 24 hours left!</p>

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<p>Submitted! Fantastic! No more worries until school starts again. Thanks everybody (except those who just stole away my essays and didn’t respond)</p>

<p>dont shoot me</p>

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<p>No no.. my Yale was Dec 31 :D</p>