<p>With the help of my teacher, I was able to revise most of my essay but I want you guys to read and tell me if it's ready to go. I would love any advice or comments on grammatical issues and contents. Thanks!</p>
<p>Any experts?</p>
<p>Anybody willing to read my essay?</p>
<p>Please????</p>
<p>hey ill revise if u want....im a beast at essays/writing</p>