I need an opinion on my essay!

Applying to College
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<p>Is anyone willing to read it? I've talked with my gc and 2 english teachers and all of them liked it...but I had to cut down about 400 words. I'm not sure how it looks now that I've cut down so much...it might have lost some meaning.</p>

<p>Please help!</p>

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<p>I'd love to read it!</p>

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<p>Actually, nvm...I want to edit it a bit more before I post it...thanks anyway</p>