<p>I worked on this with my college guy and he seems to think its good. I know that it's been submitted already, but I'm worried I didn't demonstrate "fit" enough. If anybody would read it, just PM me. I'll read whatever you need edited. Thanks so much. </p>
<p>pm me</p>
<p>You can send it to me (I applied ed to CALS), I’ll read it and give feedback when I get a chance </p>
<p>PM me</p>
<p>I’ll read it if you’d like</p>
<p>Pm me</p>
<p>PM me</p>
<p>I’m a parent & a decent editor…plus my kid is NOT applying to Cornell…i’m happy to give an honest/blunt take on it. </p>
<p>Give it here
I applied to ILR as well</p>
<p>PM me please! I applied to ILR </p>
<p>I’ll read it if you would like. I applied ED to Human Ecology so I’m no competitor. </p>