<p>Ok, this is not a finished copy by any means of my common app essay, but I am looking for some people to be BRUTALLY HONEST with the essay, and say what they feel are the strong and weak points of it. I have things I am worried about, but I will not mention them until people have read it. Thanks!</p>
<p>sure i'll help you review your essay. I don't know how this thing works tho?? do you send it to me ?</p>
<p>hey! 'd be happy to take a look and offer feedback.</p>
<p>i don't mind! won't be applying to cornell myself</p>
<p>Will read if you need. PM me.</p>
<p>Hello, looking for a couple more people to read. Thanks!</p>
<p>I'll give you some feedback on it if you don't mind sending it to an 09er (already finished my essay, though)</p>
<p>I'll help read. I'll be brutally honest with you.</p>