<p>this has got to be the least fun game in the history of the world. chin up, everyone, applying to all the words of my passive agressive little counselor:</p>
<p>"they would be crazy not to want you"
beat. spin of office chair.
"but some people are just crazy!"</p>
<p>hahaha ^^^ well my anti-hook would be that i'm actually a little too good looking you know what i mean? actually i'm just an asian kid and probably have the worst essays ever. oh right and my twin sister is applying SCEA too</p>
<p>my anti-hook would be my participation in debate being a turn-off, as it was my main EC and an essay topic. Maybe it will make me come off snooty or boring or something.
oh, and as someone else mentioned, too spread out in overall involvement, although i've been intensely involved in all of them</p>
<p>i like my essays (somewhat). But, then again, the adcom people do not have the same taste as I do so it's a matter of luck in a way.</p>
<p>Maverick, I think your essays are probably good but you're just nervous about the outcome so they seem bad now--I doubt they really are because the same thing happened to me.</p>
<p>My essays seem somewhat bland now that I read it again. I just realized that for my activity essay, I used the word "determination" 4 times, which is insane since the whole essay is just 250 words. Also, my dear roommate essay seems to lack a focus and my long essay is way too choppy. I don't know why I even wrote I what I wrote. lol.</p>
<p>The early essays are all a little rough because it's due two months earlier than the RD ones. I had to revise my long one for other schools and it feels raw and cliched.</p>
<p>But then, we had an entire summer to work on it. Not that I actually wrote a word over summer. Ahem.</p>
<p>my anti-hook: not outstanding. good scores, but no prestigious honors/summer programs. and i wrote my short answers in like 2 days. eep. it seems like most people write several drafts over several weeks. i was pretty happy with my essay, but i dunno...it's not typical so i'm kinda scared.</p>
<p>sirmomo: completely know what you mean. I wrote all my essays that last week; started/finished 2 short answers in 1 day. </p>
<p>Beyond that, I only submitted 2 recs, no awesome research, scattered interests, lots of qualified people with legacies/connections also applying SCEA from my school.</p>
<p>I feel confident in my essays, recs, and ecs (had a live music audition), but I know my GPA is going to be a limiting factor. I have an upward trend, but having over 1/4 B's wont reflect too well on my persistence and academic focus.</p>