<p>Decision: Accepted</p>
<p>Objective:
SAT I (breakdown): 2040 (620 M, 630 CR, 790 W)
ACT (breakdown): 32 superscore (31 without, I took it three times)
SAT II: 710 Bio, 710 History, 720 Literature
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 4.0
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): 8/845
AP (place score in parenthesis): Psych (5) Bio (4) Calc AB (4) Lang (5) APUSH (5)
IB (place score in parenthesis): N/A
Senior Year Course Load: AP Stats, AP Physics C, AP Lit, AP Gov, regular Spanish 4, Treble Choir
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): Outstanding Participant in PSAT, AP Scholar with Distinction</p>
<p>Subjective:</p>
<p>Extracurriculars (place leadership in parenthesis): Treble Ensemble (President 12th, Section leader 11th) Silver Pen (writing club President for 2 years) and published a book. CSF (California Scholarship Fed. co-President) Published a short story sophomore year. Ongoing piano lessons since age 8.
Job/Work Experience: Writer/Editor at All Women Stalk, an online magazine. Tutor.
Volunteer/Community service: Homeless shelter during school breaks; taught Sunday school year round.
Summer Activities: NSLC Communications, DWC Script and Video Productions summer 2014
Essays (rating 1-10, details): 9-10
Recommendations (rating 1-10, details): I don’t know, I didn’t read them.</p>
<p>Teacher Rec #1: Probably good; from my AP Lang teacher and she included things I forgot in my App (like awards and publishing because I’m dumb and awful and forgot to include those!) Plus I know her outside of school. Hopefully 9-10
Teacher Rec #2: Maybe generic. He said he had a “formula”, but he really liked me and is an amazing writer so maybe like 7-8-9
Counselor Rec: Who knows? There are 4000 kids in my school, so she doesn’t know me that well. But we had a few good talks, so probably 7-8.
Additional Rec: N/A
Interview: N/A</p>
<p>Other</p>
<p>Applied for Financial Aid?: Not yet
Intended Major: English/ Literature
State (if domestic applicant): California
Country (if international applicant): USA
School Type: Public
Ethnicity: African American
Gender: Female
Income Bracket: $110,000+
Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): URM</p>
<p>Reflection
I honest-to-goodness did not think I would get in. I prayed my butt off and fasted for two days, so maybe that’s why I got in. I cried like a freaking infant and tore off my jacket and threw it on the floor when I found out. I don’t know if those are congruent symptoms of shock or what but that’s what happened. Then I fell on the floor and my mom and I just cried because we both didn’t think this was humanly possible, for me at least. I honestly didn’t see it coming, my test scores are so low. My essays honestly rocked though, both AP Lit teachers at my school thought they were good enough to get me in.
Strengths: I published a book and work for a magazine so that shows interest and dedication to me field. So basically extracurriculars and essays. My voice was really strong and unique in my essays.
Weaknesses: Test scores. So so so bad. Like if my kid got those scores I would chastise her into the ground.
Why you think you were accepted/waitlisted/rejected: Hopefully this isn’t the chief reason, but being a minority probably helps. And my essays… they really kicked butt, I’m not afraid to say it. I legit like reading them! Plus, like I said, not many teens can say they’re a paid editor of a magazine nor a published author so that helps. Plus, I really care about what I do. Like I really, sincerely care about writing, teaching (as in tutoring and Sunday school), and music, so that’s why everything in my life revolves around those things. I think that shows in an application.
Where else were you accepted/waitlisted/rejected: Nowhere yet. Applied to Harvard, Yale, UCI, and UCR. Applying to Scripps. </p>
<p>General Comments: To conclude, good luck to EVERYONE applying! Pray and send positive thoughts into the universe because if I can make it, anyone can. I always tell my friends “I’m not a real person yet”, but I finally feel like I am. It’s a great feeling, so keep working hard and you might get there! I heard something like this in a sermon once, but I think it applies quite well here too: Make sure you’re not a lake, that covers a lot of space but doesn’t go very deep. Also, don’t be a well that only goes deep in one area. Be an ocean, that spans miles and has great depth. Basically, do a lot, and be passionate. That’s the BEST advice I can give to prospective applicants. Also important is simply having fun. I shopped and hung out with friends in HS way more than I studied or worked on college apps. Everyone is different, but I think that if you focus on yourself more than anything else, colleges will view you as a “real person” and you’ll view yourself the same way, then that will show in your application!
Also I can’t wait to meet all of my potentially-future classmates! Message me so we can get to know one another before we embark on this next chapter of our lives together! Ahhh so exciting! Good luck again! </p>