Decision: Accepted
Objective:
SAT I (breakdown): 1520 New SAT, 770 Reading/Writing, 750 Math
ACT (breakdown): 36 composite, 36 Reading, 36 English, 35 Math, 35 Science
SAT II: 800 US History, 760 Physics, 760 Math Level 2
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 4.0
Weighted GPA: 4.79
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): N/A
AP (place score in parenthesis): US History (5), Calc BC (5), English Language and Composition (5)
IB (place score in parenthesis): IB World History (7)
Senior Year Course Load: IB Physics HL, IB Chemistry HL, IB LA HL, Honors Calculus 2-3, IB French SL, Choir
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): National Merit Finalist, Academic All American for swimming, 9 special awards at state science fair including national awards (awards from National Oceanic and Atmospheric Admin and The American Institute of Professional Geologists), 1st High School Intern in 13 years to win an Outstanding Presentation Award at a Postdoctoral Poster Symposium
Subjective:
Extracurriculars (place leadership in parenthesis): Environmental Club (elected officer), High School Swim Team (captain), club swim team, choir, piano, Model UN, track
Job/Work Experience: Paid internship at National Oceanic and Atmospheric Admin. (NOAA), OSMP Junior Ranger (helped maintain trails)
Volunteer/Community service: Involved in NHS, tutored students at school since sophomore year, involved in a project helping senior citizens, also helped plant trees/write grants for picnic tables through my environmental club
Summer Activities: Internship at NOAA, swimming
Essays (rating 1-10, details):
Common App Essay: 9
I wrote about my experience at NOAA, using the childhood to adulthood prompt. I talked about learning how to program independently and finding my love for the scientific method. I also made sure to emphasize my love for the process of learning, for knowledge itself. A bit cliche, but I think it did the job.
Stanford Activity Essay: 9
I wrote about my love for the peace and quiet of swimming. I think it stood out because it demonstrated that I don’t only participate in academic activities, that I also love the teamwork and community of my sport.
Stanford Intellectual Vitality Essay: 7
I talked about the need to listen to different viewpoints, but I think it could have been misinterpreted after the election.
Stanford Roommate Essay: 7
I thought this essay was slightly generic; I just wrote about my various quirks and that I hoped we could accept each other.
Stanford “What Matters to You?”: 9
I thought this essay was really good, as it explored my love for nature and my hope to make a difference in our changing climate.
Recommendations (rating 1-10, details):
Teacher Rec #1: 10- This was from my history teacher, and it was really good. I was the only student to receive a 7 on the IB test at my school, so he really made it count.
Teacher Rec #2: 7- This was from my physics teacher, and it was slightly generic but still decent.
Counselor Rec: 5- My school is giant, so the counselors don’t really know the students…
Additional Rec: 10- I was deferred to regular decision, so I got my chemistry teacher to write me an additional rec letter. I was his student aide, and we have a really good relationship, so I’m assuming that this really helped.
Interview: 10- My interviewer asked me a lot about the research that I have done at NOAA, and we ended up talking for over an hour.
Other: IB Diploma Candidate
Applied for Financial Aid?: Yes
Intended Major: Physics, minor in history
State (if domestic applicant): Colorado
Country (if international applicant):
School Type: Public
Ethnicity: Caucasian
Gender: Female
Income Bracket: Middle class
Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): Woman in science?
Reflection
Strengths: I thought my essays were really good, as writing has always been one of my strengths. I think that they really conveyed my work ethic and my love for learning. In addition, my test scores are also pretty good. I also think that I presented a clear narrative through my activities-the environment, research about the environment at NOAA, yet that I also presented balance through my love for swimming. I also think that my rec letters were really good.
Weaknesses: I haven’t taken as many AP tests as a lot of people because of the IB Program. I also haven’t done many academic competitions or held many leadership positions.
Why you think you were accepted/waitlisted/rejected: I think that it probably came down to my essays, which I worked really hard on. I really felt that they represented who I am. I also emphasized the fact that I taught myself how to program and my initiative through my research at NOAA, which I think that they probably appreciated. I tried to present a coherent picture and to connect the dots in my application.
Where else were you accepted/waitlisted/rejected:
Accepted: University of Michigan, Brown, Dartmouth, Middlebury, Carleton, Vanderbilt, Macalester, University of Washington
Waitlisted: Williams
Rejected: Harvard, Princeton, Pomona
General Comments:
Honestly, I think that this process is just a lottery. I’m still so shocked that I got in because I know that there are so many people who are more qualified that I am. College is what you make of it, so even if you didn’t get in, there will still be so many opportunities. I am just so grateful for the one that has been given to me. Congratulations and good luck to everyone!