strange essay format?

College Essays
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<p>i want to make my essay with three or four short "stories" /experiences and how each have impacted me and what they taught me. and then have a conclusion that basically'll put these really different experiences together to show how i realized what i want to do in college/the future.</p>

<p>is this really weird? do you think it'll be appreciated by colleges?</p>

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<p>Hmmm...It might come off looking like you couldn't write well enough to transition smoothly between experiences, but I think you will be fine as long as you make sure the fragments are very well written. It might help if you could connect them internally somehow...maybe with one little detail. Honestly, its hard to say since i haven't read it.</p>