<p>It's actually two essays. Two different formats, but similar essay. I'll explain via PM.</p>
<p>(Only PM'ing the essay too :()
I'd love to get some (brutal/constructive) feedback.
(Really brutal feedback.)</p>
<p>The format of the essay is slightly unusual, and I'm pretty sure it'll definitely stand out. However, I'm not certain if you can do the essay in this format, so it'd be great if you could clear this up for me.</p>
<p>Anyone nice (harsh) enough to critique? :D</p>
<p>I can be brutal! PM it over.</p>
<p>PM Me – I’m a senior into college with nothing better to do (at the moment.) 
And I’m really straightforward.</p>
<p>Thanks! =].
It’d be great if you could just read both, tell me which one has the most promise, and then just critique that one, :D.</p>
<p>you can pm me if you like to:)</p>
<p>I can be brutal. and nice. Pm please</p>
<p>I don’t feel comfortable sending my essay to you two (ido.potter and whoisthis). Sorry :(!</p>
<p>You can PM me. </p>
<p>I’m into college (you can find my own personal statement posted somewhere on these pages), and a REALLY tough editor. When I work on my school’s lit mag, they have to tear me away from things because “it’s only a high school magazine. It won’t be perfect”, lol.</p>
<p>Plus your “unique format” thing really piqued my curiosity.</p>
<p>I will read it.</p>
<p>What is the topic?</p>
<p>I’ll read it.</p>
<p>3 of my pieces have been published.</p>
<p>XD</p>
<p>I will read it. You can PM me.</p>
<p>wendi , no problem:) good luck</p>
<p>I am a mom with a son who is going to be a freshman in 2009 at Penn State. You can PM me your essay and will try to be as constructive as possible.</p>
<p>send it to <a href="mailto:priyanka222@gmail.com">priyanka222@gmail.com</a></p>
<p>i’ll try my best to give you awesome constuctive criticism</p>
<p>PM me!
I will look into it</p>
<p>I’ll read it - PM please :)</p>
<p>i will read both essays!
pm me</p>
<p>I’ll give feedback if you PM me</p>