<p>So...</p>
<p>I'm finished with both my essays, but I'm afraid my "describe the world you come from" might be a little bland, and almost a "McEssay'. Well, not really a McEssay, I think it is pretty unique, but I don't know if I picked a good topic to write about. </p>
<p>I wrote about a city that I used to live in and its impact on me, but I haven't lived there in other 5+ years. It was NYC and I lived there during 9/11. I was affected by 9/11 in a few personal ways and I incorporated that into my essay. However, I was in third grade at the time of 9/11, so I remember what happened, but I was a little young. </p>
<p>What do you think? I think I wrote a pretty good essay, but I am not sure. </p>
<p>I hate bugging people about this, but would anyone mind reading over what I wrote? </p>
<p>Thanks</p>