Terrible UC Essays - criticism?

<p>I was looking over my UC app and started reading over my UC essays and just got the impression that they were pretty atrocious.</p>

<p>Would anybody want to give them a cursory glance and tell me whether or not I should be worried? I'm especially concerned about UC Berkeley: UC GPA of 4.17 (I think), SAT 2170, ACT 33, I'm RIGHT on the line and I'm afraid my essay might completely have broken my admission chances.....</p>

<p>I can read them.</p>