<p>Golden Bear- thanks for the ideas!
karupt- i think im in the same boat as you. i really really want to go to UCLA but i think it will be a bit of a reach for me b/c of my low sat scores. so basically i need a killer essay to have any chance at all.
an example would be appreciated =)</p>
<p>anyone make any progress?</p>
<p>any examples would be appreciated.</p>
<p>i don't really like the 3 sub-topic dealy.</p>