three essays!! any comments [general or specific] appreciated

College Essays
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<p>so i need a few people to glance over three essays i've written. i'm not necessarily looking for grammatical suggestions, or any other specific edits. i want people's thoughts on my ideas and whether or not they're clear enough, etc.</p>

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<p>bump 10 char</p>

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<p>Sure, PM me and I'll give you some comments =D</p>

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<p>Since you've helped me a lot, I can critique your other two essays if you feel comfortable doing so.</p>

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<p>i'll read it</p>

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<p>thanks! any others?</p>

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<p>i'll read it..send it over!</p>

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<p>Ill help you out</p>