U of Chicago: Essay and a doubt

<p>Hello you all! I am an international student and I would love to have my short answer feedbacked. It's the optional one, about passions and stuff. I'm working on the first one, as I only noticed the "1-2 paragraph" rule after I had finished my 5th :-(</p>

<p>Thanks a lot in advance!</p>

<p>PS: Oh, the doubt. I have a couple of essays I liked. One, I'm to Columbia and the other I sent as Penn's optional. I want to reuse one of them for my extended essay to U of C, but I'm not 100% sure if they answer the prompt properly. Would someone mind helping me with that as well? Double thanks a lot in advance!</p>

<p>Anyoooone??</p>

<p>you can send it to mee!</p>

<p>down to trade :)</p>

<p>I’ll take a look
Oh and you could always send one of the other essays under topic 5. Just make up a cool question</p>

<p>anybody else???</p>