UC Personal Statement 2: Please give critiques!

<p>Just comment if you are interested and I will PM you. I will also be happy to read yours as well, just let me know. You can even read my first one too if you so please!!!</p>

<p>Thank you!</p>

<p>Here is the prompt:</p>

<p>Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud and how does it relate to the person you are?</p>

<p>any takers?</p>

<p>nvm…</p>