UC personal statement rough draft

College Essays
1

<p>can someone read my uc personal statement and offer me advice on what is good and what needs improvement?</p>

2

<p>I’d love to read :)</p>

3

<p>I’d love to read and give comment… :D</p>

4

<p>I am happy to read and comment - PM to me. I am a parent of high school students.
Not an expert, but I can offer feedback.</p>

5

<p>I will read it.</p>