UC personal statement

College Essays
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<p>is 1045 words ok for the combined two prompts? (+45) Anyone willing to take a look and see what can be cut out? If so, pm me or IM me on aim, my sn is "battleidiot." </p>

<p>Ok thanks! </p>

<p>PS: need some feedback and critiques for my UoP essay as well. due this friday!! >_<</p>

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<p>When the UC admissions guy came over to our school...we asked him and he said, officially 35 words over. </p>

<p>Try to cut anything that is unnecessary or that you may have stated before.</p>