UC Prompt 1 Essay Help!

<p>I have just "finished" writing my first personal statement but am not sure if it is appropriate in terms of answering the actual prompt. If someone can read it and give feed back it would mean a lot to me.</p>

<p>Sure ill read I for you!</p>

<p>Pm sent.Anyone else?</p>

<p>I can read, glad to help you~</p>