<p>Decision: Deferred then Accepted</p>
<p>Objective:[ul]
[<em>] SAT I (breakdown): 800 CR, 690 M, 730 W (dumb luck for the W score; I got a 11 on that essay, and only three MCs wrong)
[</em>] SAT I superscore (breakdown): 2220
[<em>] SAT II: 780 Literature, 770 World History
[</em>] Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 3.5ish
[<em>] Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): Top 20%
[</em>] Senior Year Course Load: Hardest available
[<em>] Number of other applicants in your school: 1
[</em>] Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): Two international writing competitions, two local writing competitions, a couple of MUN Best Delegates and Honourable Mentions, a couple of local debate comp Best Speakers, a couple of local drama/public speaking comps champions and runner-ups, Harvard and Princeton Book Awards, got highest scores in two subjects for two consecutive years, received school’s Outstanding Talent Award and Service Awards [/ul]
Subjective:[ul]
[<em>] Extracurriculars (place leadership in parentheses): Debate Team (founder and captain), Model United Nations (Executive Committee of university-level local MUN organiser, captain of school team), Literature Society (chairlady), student government (campaign manager), Choir, Drama Club, cheerleading, 3 Distinctions in 3 Coursera courses
[</em>]Job/Work Experience: Interned at local radio station, and publisher; been working as a tutor for 2-3 years for three kids
[<em>]Volunteer/Community service:[/ul] 300(?) hours at a non-profit aiming to integrate immigrants into society; developed curriculum for teaching them the local dialect, amongst other volunteering experiences
Writing (Write a brief description and Rate Quality on 1-10 Scale; 10 as Best):[ul]
[</em>] Essays (Include Subjects): Defining experience that turned you into a young adult, or something like that; can’t remember. 7-8ish? I wrote it in second person, which is kind of creative, and I alluded to my dad’s suddenly leaving
[<em>] Common App Main: [<em>]
[</em>] Extended essay(which topic): You are you and your. I’m not going to say much about what I exactly wrote, but everyone who read it said it was really, really creative and thought-provoking, and personally, I loved it. 8-10.
[</em>] Optional Essay: Wrote about a heap of stuff, from literature to music to ballet. Very lyrical. 8-10.
[li] Why Chicago: Could go both ways, lol. I wrote about my passion for anthropology and how UChicago could offer me the college experience I wanted - in a letter. Beginning sentences were: I like you. You like me. We dont know each other though, not yet. 1-10. [/ul]</p>[/li]
<p>Other:[ul]
[<em>] Teacher Recommendation #1: Loves me, but wrote an app that lacked anecdotes and stuff that would actually shed more light into who I am, I think.
[</em>] Teacher Recommendation #2: Same as teacher rec #1
[<em>] Counselor Rec: Same as teacher rec #1
[</em>] Additional Rec: Sent in rec from a mentor at the radio station after getting deferred
[<em>] Interview: UChicago forced an interview on me, and it was awesome. Alum and I talked about everything, from philosophy to the local curriculum. Fought for me when I got deferred
[</em>] Art Supplement: Five pages of essays and poetry that won me awards
[<em>] Date Submitted App: 1/10/2013
[</em>] Country (if international applicant): Hong Kong
[<em>] School Type: Top 25 public grammar school
[</em>] Ethnicity: Mixed. Chinese-Portuguese-Trinidadian
[<em>] Gender: Female
[</em>] Income Bracket: Fam has been living on social welfare for three years
[<em>] Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): Background, first gen, a little bit of minority in me [/ul]
Reflection[ul]
[</em>] Strengths: Essays, ECs, awards, SAT IIs
[<em>] Weaknesses: Got a C and a D in freshman year. Bad GPA. Poor recs. International needing a huge amount of financial aid
[</em>] Why you think you were accepted: Deferred because I needed a lot of aid, along with said weaknesses; accepted because I sent them three notes about my passion for UChicago
[li] What would you have done differently?: Better recs. Supremely better recs. [/ul][/li]**General Comments/Congratulations/Venting/Commiserations, etc: ** Good luck, everyone! So looking forward to meet you guys </p>