<p>Hi! I'm new to CC, I'm applying to UF and I'm wondering if someone would like to give me their feedback on my essay :) </p>
<p>Thanks!</p>
<p>You can message me your essay if you’d like, and I’ll do my best! I’m pretty sure there’s a forum on here specifically for essays though, so this thread probably belongs there.</p>
<p>You can give me a message if you want, I would be happy to help you read through your essay.</p>
<p>I’d be happy to read it! 
I have extensive experience with editing essays, both on CC.com and as a coach at my school’s writing center, so hopefully I can be of some help to you 
Just PM me and I’ll give you my email address.</p>
<p>^^ would you please give me some feedback on my essay?</p>
<p>i would like to read it as well</p>