UF Essay (Please Help!)

<p>Hello all,</p>

<p>I'm a new member here and I'm not sure about asking you guys to review and critique my UF essay in this forum, but since essays are a part of the admissions process, I guess it's worth a try. I apologize in advance if this doesn't belong in this section of College Confidential.</p>

<p>If anyone would be willing to read my essay by 6:00 Eastern Time (U.S.), I can e-mail it to you or IM it to you on Yahoo. Any takers? =)</p>

<p>Thanks much,</p>

<p>musicloverabby</p>

<p>I’ll give you feedback. PM!</p>

<p>sure, PM over yonder</p>