unsure about my commonapp essay, does anyone want to read it?

<p>Sorry that I didn’t see all of your posts. I figured once it got to the third page nobody would see it. I re-read it a few times and I really didn’t like it so I decided to scrap it. If anyone is interested in reading my new essay (The one about a place that you feel happy at. I did my local bowling alley) then I will be posting a new topic. thanks for all the responses and sorry that I didn’t get back to you.</p>

<p>I’ll read it! PM me</p>

<p>Hit me up, I’ll read it</p>

<p>pm me, i’ll read it!</p>

<p>PM me, Columbia 2016</p>