unsure about my commonapp essay, does anyone want to read it?

College Essays
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<p>So I just completed my (very) rough draft of my common app essay. I chose the prompt about the transition to adulthood. Overall I think it is okay, but I feel like I rambled a lot, and didn't address the prompt very well (Is that ok?) I appreciate all suggestions, but I don't really want to change the wording unless it is for clarity (there will probably be some clarity issues) because I don't want to come off as someone I'm not even if it means it is a more attractive essay.</p>

<p>So, would anyone be interested in reading it?</p>

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<p>I can read it. PM me.</p>

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<p>That’s a problem.</p>

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<p>It depends. You need to follow the prompt on some level, but I think a lot of people take them too literally.</p>

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<p>I can read it, too.</p>

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<p>i’ll read it!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it sure!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it!</p>

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<p>i’ll read it as well! pm me</p>

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<p>Ill read it!</p>

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<p>Ill read it ! ^.^ ill give my thoughts as well lol</p>

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<p>No thanks. I don’t want to.</p>

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<p>i can.pm me</p>

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<p>I can read it too :)</p>

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<p>I can read it!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it !! PM me :)</p>

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<p>PM me (10 char.)</p>

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<p>Sure! PM me</p>

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<p>i can edit it! PM Me.</p>

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<p>I’ll read! PM me</p>

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<p>I can read if need be</p>