USC short answer-please help edit?

<p>Hi,</p>

<p>Is anyone interested in editting my short answer?</p>

<p>The prompt is: Describe your academic interests and how you plan to pursue them at USC.</p>

<p>I would like to know if mine
*answers the prompt
*states my academic interests
*does it "kiss up" to USC? I don't want it to...
*is it too long</p>

<p>:D</p>

<p>You can send me it, I already submitted my application</p>

<p>You can send them to me. I’m a student at USC.</p>