very much in need

<p>I'm an international student and I plan to apply this year.</p>

<p>I have finished my first draft essay. However, my friends all of them told me "it's pretty interesting, strange, but not deep", some said "too risky". But I really like it and wonder if anyone has time to have a look at it? </p>

<p>Thank you so much. I really want a native to read and judge it. :D</p>

<p>not a native, but I can read it if you want.
I am applying this year, too, but finished my essay and already submitted my ED app.</p>

<p>it doesn't matter you apply this year or not :D, I can make friends you know. thank you so much. How can I contact?</p>

<p>I'll read it, kind of in the same boat - not international though just living abroad!
PM it to me!
'09er but i've written my essays!</p>