<p>I'm an international student and I plan to apply this year.</p>
<p>I have finished my first draft essay. However, my friends all of them told me "it's pretty interesting, strange, but not deep", some said "too risky". But I really like it and wonder if anyone has time to have a look at it? </p>
<p>Thank you so much. I really want a native to read and judge it. :D</p>