<p>Could anyone please give me brutally honest advice on my essay please?</p>
<p>i’ll read it. send it over.</p>
<p>I’m pretty tough-- you can send it to me& let me know where you are applying…</p>
<p>you can pm me…I won’t give the generic “this is good” response.</p>
<p>pm it to me and i’ll give you all the advice i can :)</p>