<p>Hi. Normally I'm not this nervous, lol, but I'm returning to school after a 2-year break (explained below) and have no idea about my chances. Please help me!</p>
<p>I'm applying as a freshman, History major (except Mass Maritime: I'm applying there as an Emergency Management major).</p>
<p>GPA: 3.5 (weighted)</p>
<p>Class rank: Top 25%, roughly 200 students</p>
<p>AP Courses:
AP English - 3 on AP exam
AP Biology - 5 on AP exam
AP European History - 5 on AP exam</p>
<p>Dual enrollment:
Took Japanese History at a local state school during senior year, got an A</p>
<p>Honors courses:
- Freshman, Sophomore, and Junior English (no AP English offered until SR year)
- Biology
- Chemistry
- Earth Science
- Environmental Science
- U.S. History (no AP offered until SR year)</p>
<p>SAT:
700 Critical Reading, 650 Writing, 550 Math (lol)
Composite = 1900 if you include Writing; if not it's 1250</p>
<p>SAT II:
English Lit: 740</p>
<p>ECs:
- School newspaper, all 4 years, Staff Writer and promoted to Sports Editor in senior year (5 to 10 hours per week, 38 weeks per year)
- School literary magazine, all 4 years, Staff Writer (5 hours per week, 38 weeks per year)
- Ju Jitsu, all 4 years, achieved brown belt
- Equestrian sports, 3 years, can ride both English and Western (10 hours per week, 50 weeks per year)
- Varsity Swim Team, 11th grade, 15 hours per week, 14 weeks per year
- Junior Varsity Basketball, 9th and 10th grades, 15 hours per week, 14 weeks per year</p>
<p>Employment:
- (My Boss's Name) & Associates d/b/a Vector Marketing - 1 year - Sales representative. Responsible for the direct sale of Cutco Cutlery from initial contact through finalized sale. Promoted after 4 months to Assistant Manager and served as first female Assistant Manager in Division history; responsible for assisting District Manager with Human Resources decisions. Formulated and delegated advertising campaigns. Gave weekly "pep talk" to motivate and teach new representatives.</p>
<ul>
<li><p>(My Name) & Associates d/b/a Vector Marketing - 8 months (post-graduate) - District Manager. Responsible for running (My County) franchise of Vector Marketing Corporation. Responsible for all budgeting, analysis, Human Resources decisions, and advertising campaigns. Devised and ran weekly sales meetings. Increased territory sales by 35% over previous summer. Youngest District Manager in Northeast Region. #3 District Office in Northeast Region for Summer 2008.</p></li>
<li><p>Insurance Agency - Sophomore through Senior years - Filing Clerk. Discreetly handled confidential customer documents.</p></li>
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<p>Honors / Awards:</p>
<ul>
<li>John and Abigail Adams Scholarship (for those not from Mass: if you score in the top 25% on the MCAS you get this; it's a full ride to any state school due to excellence in Math and English) - 11th grade</li>
<li>(My High School Name) Science Award for Environmental Science: Awarded to the top student in each discipline - 11th grade</li>
<li>(My High School Name) Voice of Democracy Essay Finalist - 11th grade</li>
<li>Presidential Classroom nominee and participant - elected as mock "Secretary of State" for the National Security seminar (week-long program in Washington, D.C.; a teacher has to nominate you) - 12th grade</li>
<li>(My Town Name) Fire Fighter's Association Scholarship - merit-based scholarship ($500) - 12th grade</li>
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<p>Recommendations:</p>
<ul>
<li>High School teacher: this teacher absolutely loved me. She actually wrote 2 pages about how intellectual and promising I am. I also babysat her kids for 2 years under-the-table (which is why it's not listed in employment history).</li>
<li>Division Manager of Vector: this letter explains how hard-working I am and what I've been up to since graduating.</li>
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<p>Essay:</p>
<p>I'm a strong writer; this is the best part of my application (if I do say so myself). It's one page, written in short-story format, explaining through dialogue and internal monologue why I left a great job to go back to school and why I want to serve as an Officer in the US Army after graduating.</p>
<p>Other:
I'm a Caucasian female and a first-generation college student. Lifetime Massachusetts resident.</p>
<p>Schools:</p>
<ul>
<li>Virginia Military Institute - applying through binding E.D. and have scheduled an on-campus interview for 5 days before the E.D. deadline</li>
<li>Mass Maritime Academy - applying through non-binding E.A.</li>
<li>The Citadel</li>
<li>Norwich University</li>
<li>Drexel</li>
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