Wanna read both of my UC Personal Statements?!!

<p>If you are interested, I will PM you my essays. I have already revise them but I need more editing. I need some good critiques and feedback. Please, I need your help! My major concerns are grammar, structure, content, etc.
Thank you!</p>

<p>would be glad to. <a href="mailto:biggumt@yahoo.com">biggumt@yahoo.com</a></p>

<p>sure thing :) pm me or email to <a href="mailto:jwilliam41@hotmail.com">jwilliam41@hotmail.com</a></p>

<p>sure .......</p>

<p>id be glad to help. pm it over.</p>