Hello, my name is Alexandra and I am an international student. I’ve had this goal to get into Yale for about 2 years and I’m doing everything in my power to build up my chances.
General Information-
Gender: Female
GPA: 4.25 from a scale of 5 (current)
Curriculum: IB (I have been in IB since Freshman year)
Achievements/Extracurricular/Volunteer work:
Grade 10: Student Council, MUN (Model United Nations), Science fair competition (national level), Debate National level (competed in other countries), Out of school competitions (debate and science), Trained Dancer for 8 years, Won medals in several dance competitions in school and out of school, Volunteered at animal shelter every twice in a week, volunteered to teach dance in different academies, Played badminton and competed against different schools (although I’m not very good in sports), Have acted in school plays and theater (only once), Worked on a personal research paper (5,000 words) and published it, Signed up for 4 different after school clubs which I attended every week, Had 1 letter of recommendation from my Humanities Teacher, Got certificates and medals in many debates and science fairs and dance competitions.
That’s all I can think of for now, I might be missing some more things but thankfully I’ve always had a list of Achievements that I kept with me.
Grade 11: IB subjects: Business HL, English HL, History HL, Math studies, French SL, ESS. TOK, Extended Essay, 150 hours of Community service.
Continued Student council, participated in MUN, Debate competitions, 3 after school clubs, Extra Volunteer work in science labs and research labs, Published a research paper, participated in 3 dance competitions and won medals and certificates, NASA school trip, Debate marathon in Malaysia, 2 letter of recommendations from Business Teacher and History Teacher, Academic Appreciation Award, Dance champion finalist, Community Service trip to Africa to help poor kids and build schools for them, Continued in badminton team and won certificate, started working on college essays to different Universities in USA and Canada, 2nd Highest GPA in class, After school volunteer work to educate poor kids.
Again, I might be missing a few more details but this is what I could remember as of now.
Grade 12: Student Council, MUN, Debate competitions (national level), Medals for Science fairs and quizzes, Dance championship winner, 3 after school clubs, Acted in school play, Academics Awards, Research lab certificate, recommendation letter from Principal and school counsellor and French teacher, College essays complete, Highest rank in class, Debate Marathon (national level), Singapore space trip, worked on another research paper and published, Founder of Educate girls organization along with a few other people, Founder of a non-profit dance academy to teach little girls dance, Appreciation letters from Principal and supervisors, Trips to India to support and raise awareness about Girls Education cause.
SAT final score: 2345 out of 2400
ACT scores: 33 out of 36
IELTS score: 9 out of 9
TOEFL points: 109 out of 120
So, these are some of my Achievements in the last 3 years. I did not mention Grade 9 because I wasn’t exactly a very bright student at that time, but over the course of these years I think I have displayed a lot of potential and I’m proud of that.
I also have some connections to that University, but I wouldn’t exactly call it connections. I know 2 student who currently study in Yale. My school is ranked in the outstanding category and there are many people who get into colleges like Cornell, University of Toronto, UCLA, University of Penn, Brown, Columbia, etc, and many other top ranked colleges in England and around the globe. I think there was 1 student who got into Yale from my school. And I think overall my school has good connections to top Universities around the World.
Please note that I have also repeated an year (Grade 10) in order to get higher GPA’s and fill up all the extras and volunteer.
And… I had a choice at that time to continue in Grade 11 or repeat the year and I chose to repeat an year because I wanted my chances to go up of getting into Yale. So, yeah, frankly I’ve done and sacrificed a lot to get into Yale, a whole year to be specific. It would really, really hurt if I don’t get in because I had chose to repeat a whole year in order to score my chances.
My motivation throughout these years was Yale. I hope I made enough efforts to secure my chances. But then again, It’s not like my life will be shattered into pieces if I don’t get in, it’s just that, I’ll be kind of bummed but I guess it’s okay. I am applying to other Universities too, not just Yale, I’m applying to many Ivy leagues and also safety schools. I’ve applied in Canada and USA so I have options.
It would be really appreciated if you could reply since my College Application process is around the corner, but thankfully I’ve completed everything on time and am in the midst of sending everything away. Thank you!