What can you contribute to ___ essay?

<p>So I'm working on this one-page essay for alumni scholarship, here's the topic:</p>

<p>Many people say, “College is what you make of it.” You will have many opportunities to utilize your existing skills and talents as well as acquire new ones while attending <em>_. With this in mind, in what ways do you plan to contribute to _</em> and how will those contributions shape your experience?</p>

<p>Basically, I wrote about my academic achievement, volunteer experience, and leadership potential and how I could contribute to the school from utilizing what I've learned</p>

<p>However, I feel like I need some more examples to make my statement stronger</p>

<p>Anyone can give me some advise or what else should I write about to answer the topic question? </p>

<p>(The topic question is too simple which makes it difficult to answer)</p>

<p>Any help will be appreciated, Thanks!</p>

<p>What’s wrong with what you have? It sounds fine to me.</p>