What do you do when...

<p>your edited essays just gets worst and worst? So far, I'm writing my fifth draft for the UC application (the first prompt) and I couldn't make the essay neither flow nor coherent. What would you do in this case? </p>

<p>P.S No need to read my essay</p>

<p>Thanks in advance</p>

<p>Bump bi bump?</p>

<p>Bump bi bump again?</p>