Hi guys! I told myself that I wouldn’t do this, but I convinced myself otherwise. I was wondering if people could give me their input. Thanks! By the way, I am using the results template to post everything for now just because it makes things easier.
Objective:
SAT I (breakdown): 2220 Superscore (720 CR, 780 Math, 720 Writing, 8 Essay) (3 Sittings); 2180 Single SAT (720 CR, 780 Math, 680 Writing, 8 Essay)
ACT (breakdown): N/A
SAT II: 800 Math II, 740 World History, 720 Spanish (I am not a native speaker)
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): Not exactly sure, I would estimate 3.83/4 or a 4.6/5 (This is very, very good at my school)
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): N/A (my school does not rank but I would estimate that I am somewhere between top 5-10%, at worst comfortably in the top 15%)
AP (place score in parenthesis): AP U.S. History (5) (plus all Senior AP Exams as well as self-studying AP Microeconomics and AP Macroeconomics)
IB (place score in parenthesis): N/A
Senior Year Course Load: AP Spanish Language, AP English Language and Composition, AP Calculus AB, AP European History, Honors Theory of Music, Honors Ethics in the Modern World
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): 1st Place (State Champ) in FBLA Management Decision Making (National Finalist (Top 15 in a conference of 11,000 people)), 3rd Place in FBLA Global Business (State Level as well); I predict that I will be a National Merit Commended Scholar (probably not semi-finalist or finalist though)
Subjective:
Extracurriculars (place leadership in parenthesis): Mock Trial (9, 10, 11, 12) (Captain), FBLA (10, 11, 12) (our school’s chapter was founded in 10th grade) (Business Activities Manager and Vice President), Deeper Discussion Club (11, 12) (Co-founded), Pianist (12 years; 6 years of Jazz Piano), Volunteer at Homeless Shelter (11, 12)
Job/Work Experience: N/A (unfortunately)
Volunteer/Community service: See above (I would estimate total volunteer hours to be 100+)
Summer Activities: Volunteering, National Conference for FBLA, College Courses, Traveling/Touring, Camps (All of your typical shit; nothing special)
Essays (rating 1-10, details): CommonApp Essay I started in April :o (thank God I didn’t procrastinate) Think it’s coming along very well, still need to put on a few finishing touches but so far 8.5/10, will probably end up being 9.5/10
Recommendations (rating 1-10, details): See Below
Teacher Rec #1: AP U.S. History Teacher 9/10 - Had a very solid relationship with a teacher who was generally hated by other students, which is why I think he will write me a solid rec (also he asked me what I wanted him to include in it )
Teacher Rec #2: Honors Spanish Teacher 8/10 - Nothing amazing, but I did have her for two years and I was one of the brightest students in her class
Counselor Rec: 9.5-10/10 - I have a fantastic relationship with my guidance counselor, who has helped me with a lot of academic obstacles; for a rather large school that I go to, he knows more about me than I bet he knows about many of the other students, and I intend to talk to him about the counselor rec when I get back to school
Additional Rec: Mock Trial Lawyer Coach (4 years) 9-10/10 - I love my Mock Trial Coach, and he is very chill and he’ll pretty much write anything I ask him to (I don’t mean that in a pretentious way fyi), and I have done a lot to enhance the quality of the team (e.g. recruited the core of the team, was a solid leader for a team that was in a long rebuild and in need of leadership)
Interview: N/A yet, so I’ll just estimate how I think all of my interviews will be 8.5-9/10 - Solid, well-rehearsed yet sounds natural
Other
Applied for Financial Aid?: Not Sure yet, but probably not (I don’t know if I will qualify)
Intended Major: Philosophy (in some way, shape, or form, and either Classical Studies/Ancient History and/or Law and Society) (pre-law track as well)
State (if domestic applicant): Massachusetts
Country (if international applicant):
School Type: Larger Public (approximately 450 kids in my grade) (I go to a very competitive school; I would say slightly less competitive than a magnet school, but still very competitive)
Ethnicity: White
Gender: Male
Income Bracket: I’d estimate between $175,000 - 250,000, but I honestly have no idea (I would call myself upper middle class)
Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): Primary Legacy at UPenn (my dad went there; I know this is just a specific university, but it’s my first choice, so I would love any input from any former or current UPenn students (who should know how much legacy matters at a school like that)), Unique Interest in Philosophy that is displayed through passion in College courses and Extracurriculars (yes, this does matter)
Reflection
Strengths: Course Load (especially in relation to interests), Test Scores are not anything to be disappointed over (minus the three sittings), Most of my Extracurriculars (particularly leadership roles), Hook at UPenn (yes, it’s big), Essays
Weaknesses: Lack of an athletic extracurricular in high school (I do have a Black Belt in tae-kwon-do, though, from before high school), Volunteering/Jobs/Work Experience/Summer Activities (by far, the worst part of my application; have very little to show for work experience and summer activities are very unimportant), Ethnicity (for those who deny that URM is not one of the biggest advantages in admission, you are kidding yourselves and should read up on how much ethnicity does matter to colleges (not that being white is a disadvantage but doesn’t help really is what I’m saying)
General Comments: Here are the schools I am applying to (each will be some sort of philosophy major on a pre-law track):
Top 3:
ED University of Pennsylvania College of Arts and Sciences (Philosophy, Politics, and Economics Major and Double Minor in Ancient History and Legal Studies and History) (For those who can chance me particularly on UPenn, please remember the legacy and let me know how much that impacts the rest of my application, thanks)
EA University of Chicago (Double Major Philosophy and Allied Fields and Law, Letters, and Society)
RD Columbia University (Columbia College) (Economics - Philosophy Major)
Others:
RD Boston University (Kilichand Honors College)
RD Northwestern University (Weinberg College of Arts and Sciences)
RD Tufts Unviersity (College of Arts and Sciences)
RD New York University (College of Arts and Sciences)
RD Northeastern University (College of Arts and Sciences) - Safety
RD University of Massachusetts Amherst (Commonwealth Honors College) - Safety for me on here because of in-state tuition
RD Boston College (College of Arts and Sciences)
RD Washington University in St. Louis (College of Arts and Sciences)
I would appreciate any general advice/inputs that you guys have, as well as any specific advice you have for individual schools (especially UPenn, UChicago, and Columbia), and please be honest.
Thanks so much.