<p>I have a draft of the Brown supplement essay. I am looking for readers who can give feedback. I would like you to read my essay from an admission officer’s standpoint and then tell me what you think of it, and what impression of me it gives. Is it memorable? Basically just a quick read and a one or two sentence response.</p>
<p>If you catch grammar mistakes, feel free to point them out, or don’t. Any type of help at all is appreciated. Thank you for your generosity!</p>