<p>So I wrote two, and I can't decide which one I like better. Can anybody help me decide :) Thanks! <3 Swarthmore.</p>
<p>yeah.. i can help you..
if you need a strong critique you can PM it to me..
can you also read mine???</p>
<p>i can take a look if u still need readers</p>
<p>I'll do it too... I know they recommend that you don't let people who are applying to the school read them, but all my stuff is already sent in so I couldn't steal it or anything. So if you still need someone, I'll look over them- I actually really enjoy reading essays, haha.</p>
<p>i will read toO!</p>
<p>How long are your "Why Swarthmore?" essays? Mine is only a paragraph...</p>
<p>Mine was about five paragraphs (but not five paragraph essay structure)- 456 words. A paragraph seems a little short, they want to know you really researched and really love the school... I don't know, it all depends.</p>