Can someone read my "Why Swarthmore" essay?

<p>can someone please comment on my essay for swarthmore? i would appreciate the help.</p>

<p>yea ill check it out…pm it over</p>

<p>sure, just pm me.</p>

<p>Sure PM me please</p>

<p>Would love to read your essay. PM me. =]
(Got accepted Early Write btw).</p>

<p>i can read for you. email me!</p>

<p>bump/;…</p>

<p>I only wrote like three or four sentences and got accepted early this month. How long are those essays normally?</p>

<p>I’d be willing to read them if you are still sending. PM will do just fine.</p>

<p>my essay was 2.5 pages</p>

<p>How long did it take you to write? Just out of curiosity…</p>

<p>like six hours</p>

<p>that includes the revising and editing.</p>

<p>Oh wow, I took maybe 2 minutes…literally…</p>

<p>pm if you want ill look it over</p>

<p>sure pm :)</p>

<p>i would LOVE to read it!</p>